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Posted on Monday Jun 6 19:25:00 UTC 2011
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Posted on Friday Jun 3 18:22:00 UTC 2011
This is the concluding part of my piece on Raymond Carver and Hyperrealism.  I hope you've enjoyed reading my thoughts.  If you have any comments about this or you'd like more information on Carver then please email me at your convenience.
Towards a Definition.
Minimalist vs. Hyperrealist
In order to posit the label I choose to attach to Carver’s fiction it becomes important to examine other less credible ones, and whilst discrediting them we can verify our own. In their drive to pigeonhole writers, critics have made Carver synonymous with the minimalist short story. Under the grasp of Kim Herzinger, The Mississippi Review dedicated an entire issue to the alleged phenomenon in 1985 (Nesset, Kirk. The Stories of Raymond Carver. 1995: 4). So let us agree for the time being with the term minimalist and judge Carver and his contemporaries with that definition. We can begin by Robert Rebein’s observation of Madison Smartt Bell, writing in Harper’s in 1986, that way we can get an idea of the negative critical approach to the so called minimalists:
Minimalism, Bell wrote, “may fairly be described as a school because of its representative work contains as if by prescription, a number of specific elements”: “a trim, ‘minimal’ style, and obsessive concern for surface detail, a tendency to ignore or eliminate distinctions among the people it renders, and a studiedly deterministic, at times nihilistic, vision of the world.” For Bell, minimalism’s accomplishments were purely technical; beneath its cool surfaces and lean prose style lurked a subtle and terrible estimation of human possibility
Carver himself had very little time for such a label, as we can see here:
Carver’s style has earned him the label “minimalist” in some American literary circles, a term which makes him less than happy. “That word brings up associations with narrow vision and limited ability,” he says. “It’s true that I try to eliminate every unnecessary detail in my stories and try to cut words to the bone. But that doesn’t make me a minimalist. If I were, I’d really cut them to the bone. But I don’t do that; I leave a few slivers of meat on them
We cannot really decipher what is achieved in Carver’s fiction until we destroy this label and in many respects appreciate that the short story, regardless of its practitioner, is primarily minimal by virtue of form. What is also identified in Roland Sodowsky’s study ‘The minimalist short story: its definition, writers, and (small) heyday’, is Mark A. R. Facknitz’ declaration of two distinct types of minimalism: formal and social. This is only problematic, particularly when writers of such different qualities fall into the same group, or more importantly, like Carver, fall into both. His brevity of form can be equated to minimalism, but then so can many others. If for example we were to neatly package Carver like this we would also have to include others who are less than synonymous with the Carver school of writing. For example, when packaged with minimalism as a label we would include writers like Donald Barthelme, a contemporary of Carver and a great practitioner of the minimalist short story. However, Barthelme was notably as surreal and overall experimental as he could be minimalist; he is perhaps captured best by John Barth in his tribute to Barthelme as the ‘Thinking Man’s Minimalist’ (Barth, J. 1989). This title does cast a shadow on the form practiced by Raymond Carver, but Barth’s article is a tribute. However, there is a reiteration to be made from this. Raymond Carver’s short stories, in minimalist terms, seem in the first instance to only attract negative criticism as we have seen, criticism that we could fairly say has everything to do with Lyotard’s disruption of language games as we examined in chapter one. But minimalism cannot be the primary virtue of Carver’s new statement, and the cause of all this criticism.
Formal groupings like minimalist are problematic. They can only serve to identify a form that is shared by many writers of greater diversity. Specific content cannot be overly useful either, particularly as many of the writers in the Carver school do differ, both thematically and in content. Tobias Wolff’s stories for example consider different themes and content, his collection The Night in Question (1996) contain soldier stories (characteristic of Wolff), like ‘Casualty’ (1993) and ‘The Other Miller’ (1987). But Wolff is very much a hyperrealist too:
For two days now Miller has been standing in the rain with the rest of Bravo Company, waiting for some men from another company to blunder down the logging road where Bravo waits in ambush. When this happens, if this happens, Miller will stick his head out of the hole he’s hiding in and shoot off all his blank ammunition in the direction of the road. So will everyone else in Bravo company. Then they will climb out of their holes and get on some trucks and go home, back to the base.
This is the plan.
Miller has no faith in it. He has never seen a plan that worked, and this one won’t work either. His foxhole has about a foot of water in it. He has to stand on little shelves he’s been digging out of walls, but the soil is sandy and the shelves keep collapsing. That means his boots are wet. Plus his cigarettes are wet.
(‘The Other Miller’ 1987)
Just as we examined the openings of three Carver stories earlier, we can identify that this opening to Wolff’s is very similar. It continues throughout the story just as it does in the opening, no playing with language or heavy use of irony, it is terse and colloquial, and it doesn’t assume any literary knowledge from the reader. There is no real traditional characterisation or conventional plot; again, as with Carver, it is what is said beneath the hyperreal situations that count.
So, to equate them all to minimalism is at best unhelpful. In his article ‘Now You See Him, Now You Don't, Now You Do Again: The Evolution of Raymond Carver's Minimalism’, literary critic Adam Meyer identifies Carver’s career with minimalism as analogous to an “hourglass”, using the often cited story ‘A Small Good Thing’ (240). This identification is important because it underlines that Raymond Carver is not dedicated to minimalism. The “hourglass” Meyer refers to shows the centre as the most minimal he has been, and for the shortest time. More than anything this period of so called minimalism was inadequately labelled, yet the identification of it as something new is enough to verify a need in American literature to overthrow what had become the rather stale conventions of Postmodern literature. Again turning to one who was around at the time, Frederick Barthelme in The New York Times Book Review:
Some people were thinking, “Well, so much for irony.” Because once you’d been to the big “all over” irony of the post-modern, you couldn’t very well go back to the periodic. This was around 1972, 1974...even though the big guys had said irony was all the way of it…
[writers began to see that]
a plain sentence, drab as it may seem, might be more powerful by and large than the then standard issue clever sentence.
This change in direction, the new statement, was not made by the principle characteristics of the minimalist short story. Outlined by Adam Meyer’s study, the difference between two of the stories he discusses in his essay will serve as an excellent example to demonstrate Carver’s use of, and subsequent rejection of, minimalism.
Starting with ‘The Bath’, published in What We Talk About When We Talk About Love (1981), we will examine only the basic prose structure and syntax to begin with:
The mother decided on the spaceship cake, and then she gave the baker her name and her telephone number. The cake would be ready Monday morning, in plenty of time for the party Monday afternoon. This was all the baker was willing to say. No pleasantries, just this small exchange, the barest information, nothing that was not necessary.
Monday morning, the boy was walking to school.
[then in ‘A Small Good Thing’, published in its final form in Cathedral (1983) and included in Where I’m Calling From (1988), we see another version all together]
She gave the baker her name, Ann Weiss, and her telephone number. The cake would be ready on Monday morning, just out of the oven, in plenty of time for the child’s party that afternoon. The baker was not jolly. There were no pleasantries between them, just the minimum exchange of words, the necessary information. He made her feel uncomfortable, and she didn’t like that. While he was bent over the counter with the pencil in his hand, she studied his coarse features and wondered if he’d ever done anything else with his life besides be a baker. She was a mother and thirty-three years old, and it seemed to her that everyone, especially someone the baker’s age - a man old enough to be her father - must have children who’d gone through this special time of cakes…
This second extract continues a little further before beginning the paragraph where the boy (Scotty) gets knocked over by a car on “Monday morning”. This latter piece is by no means minimal when compared with its predecessor. Carver was a notorious rewriter of stories, yet whether ‘A Small Good Thing’ is an extension of the first, or ‘The Bath’ is a stripped down version on the former is not clear. Kirk Nesset, in The Stories of Raymond Carver, claims that ‘A Small Good Thing’ is “revised from its original form as “The Bath”. However, there are others who claim that ‘A Small Good Thing’ is the original story. It is no secret that whilst writing for What We Talk About… Gordon Lish was Carver’s editor, and a notorious one at that:
"I've wondered in my head why Lish did what he did," comments the poet Donald Hall, a friend of Carver's who objected strongly to Lish's edit of one story, "The Bath," and republished the original version as "A Small, Good Thing." "Was it unconscious jealousy?"
Carver never admitted to being Lish's creation, but he chafed and finally rebelled, forbidding Lish to edit heavily or rewrite anymore.
(Shulevitz, Judith. ‘Culturebox Rules: Lish vs. Carver’. 1998)
 If we are to attribute Carver’s minimalism to editorial amputations then we really ought to disregard it in favour of those features we can apply to all his work, no matter who was editor or how minimal it was. The minimalist debate is no longer a significant way of identifying a shift in style, thus clearly defining the difference between Carver and other Postmodernist practitioners of the short story. When Carver is at his most minimal we can see that the attributes of hyperrealism we identified earlier are as present in his later work as they were at the beginning; it is the only constant throughout his career. This would signify the change (the new statement) in the American literary short story far more than minimalism’s brief popularity.
Narrating the Hyperreal
Carver’s assertion that he “[tries] to eliminate every unnecessary detail in [his] stories and try to cut words to the bone”, can certainly lend itself to the notion of hyperreality (In, Gentry and Stull, 1990: 80). Making use of the debate, we can clearly identify that the details of his stories have been carefully chosen to concentrate on the ordinary, and by endowing it with this precision, making it more real than the real thing. We can equate this to Jean Baudrillard’s ‘The Precession of Simulacra’. Referring to “the Borges fable in which the cartographers of the Empire draw a map so detailed that it ends up covering the territory exactly”, Jean Baudrillard sets out the basic principle of simulacra (In. Simulacra and Simulation. 1994:1). He goes on using the allegory of the map to detail the current state of simulation:
Simulation is no longer that of a territory, a referential being or substance. It is the generation by models of a real without origin or reality: a hyperreal. The territory no longer precedes the map, nor does it survive it. It is nevertheless the map that precedes the territory Ύ precession of simulacra Ύ that engenders the territory…
This is the idea of a simulation without an original, the original has ceased to exist. In order to continue our examination of this it would be helpful to cite Carver himself, from Bruce Weber’s interview for The New York Times in 1984 :
All of my stories have in some way to do with my life,” Carver says. But he is firm in his assertion that he doesn’t engage in outright autobiography. The germ of a story is a single sentence…that offers a million possibilities. “It’s a process of connections,” he says. “Things begin to connect up. A line here. A word there. Stuff I heard or saw when I was 16 years old or 40 years old. There’s no way I could ever write a story about my neighbor Art. But I may someday write a story and use him wandering onto his porch and saying, ‘I’m doing my spring cleaning.’
“That picture may appear in my head later with yet another character, who is half his age. ‘I’m doing my spring cleaning. What a beautiful day.’ That may get into the story. It may have to do with a black man who is 30 years old, doing just that. Or the fact that I heard not so long ago that Art was urinating blood. There was something wrong with his bladder. I won’t forget that. And some character in my story, one I’m very close to, he may be urinating blood.”
So we have a simulation in Carver’s fiction that is built from fragments of an original, forming hyperreal characters within a hyperreal narrative. Here we can see an interesting application of Baudrillard’s theory, the original has certainly ceased to exist. We cannot say this of many preceding fictions, even if they were based on ‘true’ events or characters, primarily because, as we have identified with the metafictionalists, they are constructed with the playfulness of language in mind. We cannot even say this of earlier realist fiction because it was more concerned with representation, having traditional conventions to consider, like we identified earlier in Patricia Waugh’s study : “well-made plot, chronological sequence, the authoritative omniscient author, the rational connection between what characters 'do' and what they 'are'…”. What becomes the most fundamental factor here is the lack of conventional narrative devices and metafiction that force the story to push dialogue, and thus characters (modelled upon the real) to the forefront of the narrative; they become a strange hybrid form of realist stories; hyperreal. If, as Umberto Eco says in 1986 on his travels throughout the U.S.A, observing art in its various hyperreal guises, America is “an America of furious hyperreality, which is not that of pop art, of Mickey Mouse, or of Hollywood movies”, then why should it be unusual to make hyperreal, accurate simulations of the people as well as everything else?
 So, one of the primary reasons for Carver’s realist preference is that it simulates the lives of thousands of Americans. This is the point at which our attention must turn from Carver’s own positioning of himself firmly within the camp of realism, to our own claims toward hyperrealism. In his desire to be realistic, Carver rebelled against realism, actually verifying Postmodernism’s habit of perpetually encapsulating the term ‘realism’ in quotation marks. Just as this study began by defining the characteristics of Carver’s short stories by what they are not, we can easily draw on Baudrillard again to verify this and make a further observation:
It is always a question of proving the real through the imaginary, proving truth through scandal, proving the law through transgression, proving work through striking, proving the system through crisis…without taking into account:
The proof of theater through antitheater;
The proof of art through antiart;
The proof of pedagogy through antipedagogy…
(Simulacra and Simulation. 19) 
What we have learnt is that Carver’s neo-realist aspirations confirm (or prove) his anti-realism; his hyperrealism. We can easily verify this by reminding ourselves of the un-refuted comment made in Patricia Waugh’s study earlier: “it is impossible to describe an objective world because the observer always changes the observed” (Waugh. 1984). Richard Ford, novelist and short story writer, and friend of Carver, fondly remembers a Carver reading at in 1977:
…the effect of voice and the story upon the listener was of actual life being unscrolled in a form so distilled, so intense, so chosen, so affecting in its urgencies as to leave you breathless and limp when he was finished…Life was this way Ύ yes, we already new that. But this life, these otherwise unnoticeable people’s suitability for literary expression seemed new. One also felt that a consequence of the story was seemingly to intensify life, even dignify it…And yet the story itself, in its spare, self-conscious intensity, was such a made thing, not like life at all; it was a piece of nearly abstract artistic construction calculated to produce almost giddy pleasure…This was highly stylised, artistic writing with life, not art, as its subject. And to be exposed to it was to be bowled over.
Here we have a tributary, yet accurate description of Carver’s fiction. It certainly dispels all those criticisms about the “willingness of these authors to mirror social and cultural structures without probing towards a sense of the human spirit”, as outlined by Dan Pope, noted earlier. Ford puts much more emphasis on the fact that these stories are constructions, again silencing those who would confuse Carver’s fiction with a lack of literary skill. The fact that Carver chooses “life, not art” as his subject is one of the primary differences between his writing and what had been offered by metafiction in all its guises. Essentially what Ford expresses is that Carver could expose artifice without alienating the reader, in fact exposing it by drawing the reader into a hyperreal construction of the reader’s own world.
Another aspect of hyperrealism is seen in the characters. Carver’s characters are almost always inarticulate in some degree. Bruce Weber details the communication between Carver and the reader:
They [the characters] don’t share his wide perspective, and they don’t often go in for analysis or philosophical speculation. The intelligence of the stories is communicated over their heads, so to speak, from author to reader, and it is this quality that has led more than one critic to observe a note of condescension in some of the stories.
Carver’s characters usually have one of two choices, they can retreat into silence or, particularly at moments of high drama, they can borrow their reactions from popular culture, giving a simulated response. A story we examined in brief earlier can be extremely useful here. In ‘A Small Good Thing’ Ann Weiss’ son, Scotty, is knocked over by a car on his birthday, and later dies in hospital. The following is Ann Weiss’ reaction in a moment of high drama:
She gazed out into the parking lot and then turned around and looked back at the front of the hospital. She began shaking her head. “No, no,” she said. “I can’t leave him here, no.” She heard herself say that and thought how unfair it was that the only words that came out were the sort of words used on TV shows where people were stunned by violent or sudden deaths.”
 Of course the words she is able to muster, that remind her of words she has heard on the T.V are probably accurate, otherwise the T.V shows would not be aspiring to realist representations. This is significant of an original without origin, since the T.V shows are simulating from what we can assume is an original, yet is probably only another representation from another T.V show. Since she recognises them in the way she does, Ann Weiss’ words are thus only a simulation.
This can be connected to the larger hyperrealist school by looking at another one of its members: Bobbie Ann Mason. Mason is a good example of the first type of hyperreal narrative, where emphasis is placed on terse syntax, banal situations, and the dominance of dialogue, as we have already discussed, but perhaps her greatest attribute is her fiction’s abundance of popular culture that act as a hyperreal touchstone for reality. Some of the best examples of this appear in her collection Shiloh and Other Stories, and the title story to this collection will serve as an example. The two central characters, Norma Jean and Leroy, experienced the death of their baby. They have been separated since the traumatic event by Leroy’s job as a long distance truck driver, but having suffered an accident he can no longer drive and is thus forced to spend more time at home with Norma Jean. This stirs up memories and leads to the inevitable dissolution of their marriage. What is interesting is that Leroy’s memories are explicitly linked to popular culture:
Norma Jean and Leroy were at the drive-in, watching a double feature (Dr. Strangelove and Lover Come Back), and the baby was sleeping in the back seat. When the first movie ended, the baby was dead… Leroy can hardly remember the child anymore, but he still sees vividly a scene from Dr. Strangelove in which the president of the United States was talking in a folksy voice on the hot line to the Soviet Premier about the bomber accidentally headed toward Russia
Popular culture becomes more real than any other signifier these characters can come up with. In this way popular culture and hyperrealism are very closely linked. This dominates Mason’s collection of stories, there are many examples:
He remembered the feeling of looking out over that expanse at the sight of the big battleship and its family of destroyers. He had seen a kamikaze dive into a destroyer. The explosion was like a silent movie that played in his head endlessly like reruns of McHale’s Navy.
(‘The Ocean’)
He feels terrible, remembering his wives by their food, and remembering the war as a TV series.
(‘A New-Wave Format’)
In Mason the T.V is the primary hyperreal touchstone for reality. Characters from television are continually heralded as a representation of what they are not, they are more real on the television than they perhaps really are. However, popular culture in general, no matter what its medium, distorts the hyperreal protagonist’s perception of reality, thus substituting reality for a simulation;
“Christians are such beautiful people,” says a fat woman. “And we have such nice-looking young people. We’re not dowdy at all.”
“People just get that idea,” someone says.
A tall woman with curly hair stands up and says, “The world has become so filled with the false, the artificial Ύ we have gotten so phoney that we think the First Lady doesn’t have smelly feet. Or the Pope doesn’t go to the bathroom.”
(‘The Retreat’)
Unlike the metafictionalists, who’s primary reliance is that their audience is well read, the hyperrealist writer relies more on the reader’s ability to dispel their illusions of reality. They make no judgements, they leave that up to the reader. The deadpan narratives do not aspire to greatness and universal truths, all they achieve is an awakening of our senses to the ordinary, and more importantly, what is perceived as the ordinary, and what lies behind it.
Problematic Reproduction
The late twentieth century gave birth to the age of simulation, and perhaps John Barth was more correct than he new in the sixties when he wrote ‘The Literature of Exhaustion’. The wave of writers that followed Carver, indeed those who wrote alongside him, leave us in little doubt as to why they have evolved, this is not purely a literary reaction, there are many factors to consider. Today our lives are bombarded by what has become known as ‘reality television’. This kind of entertainment lures the viewer into a omniscient position where they can observe, and assume that their privileged position allows them to pass judgement. The hyperreal has become a matter of taste, it is what the public want. Jean Baudrillard comments on the American fascination with lived experience:
It is still to this ideology of lived experience Ύ exhumation of the real in its fundamental banality, in its radical authenticity Ύ that the American TV verité experiment attempted on the Loud family in 1971 refers: seven months of uninterrupted shooting, three hundred hours of non-stop broadcasting, without a script or a screenplay, the odyssey of a family, its dramas, its joys, its unexpected events, non-stop Ύ in short, a “raw” historical document, and the “greatest television performance, comparable, on the scale of our day-to-day life, to the footage of our landing on the moon.”
[he goes on to give us what can be used as an excellent definitions of Carver’s fiction in terms of hyperrealism]
The producers triumph was to say: “They lived as if we were not there.” An absurd, paradoxical formula Ύ neither true nor false: utopian. The “as if we were not there” being equated to “as if you were there.” It is this utopia, this paradox that fascinated the twenty million viewers…In the “verité ” experience it is not a question of secrecy or perversion, but of a sort of frisson of the real, or an aesthetics of hyperreal, a frisson of vertiginous and phony exactitude, a frisson of simultaneous distancing and magnification, of distortion of scale, of an excessive transparency.
 
It can be fairly said that it is this “utopia” that also fascinates Carver readers. It is Carver’s pen that points at the “nonsignifier [that] is exalted by the camera angle”, as Baudrillard would have, actually taking the place of the “camera lens that, like a laser, comes to pierce lived reality in order to put it to death” (28).
There is a certain amount of enjoyment in the voyeuristic qualities of this also, and Carver’s is essentially voyeurism. He deals with this issue in his story ‘The Idea’ from Will You Please… The characters are Vern, and his wife (unnamed) who narrates the story. The story’s narrator sits in her kitchen at night with the light out, watching her neighbour, who watches his wife through their bedroom window outside:
We’d finished supper and I’d been at the kitchen table with the light out for the last hour, watching. If he was going to do it tonight, it was time, past time.
When she sees him arrive at the window she becomes excited and calls to Vern, who is more than happy to join in. The story continues to develop and the hyperreal precision of it draws us into its reality. The narrator becomes sanctimonious and hypocritical:
“Someday I’m going to tell that trash what I think of her,” I said and looked at Vern.
Vern laughed sort of.
“I mean it,” I said. “I’ll see her in the market someday and I’ll tell her to her face.
Similar to ‘What’s in Alaska?’, this story’s aim is to allow the reader to see through the “excessive transparency” and pass judgement with the aid of Carver’s “camera angle”, just as the narrator passes judgement on her neighbours (Baudrillard. 1994:28). This transparency encourages us to view the lives of the narrator and her husband. Their evening’s voyeuristic show leaves the narrator hungry, but this is significantly not for sex:
I followed him into the living room. We were jumpy. It gets us like that.
“You wait,” I said.
Vern ground his cigarette out in the big ashtray. He stood beside his leather chair and looked at the TV a minute.
“There’s never anything on,” he said. Then he said something else. He said, “Maybe he has something there.” Vern lighted another cigarette. “You don’t know.”
“Anybody comes looking in my window,” I said, “they’ll have the cops on them. Except maybe Cary Grant,” I said.
Vern shrugged. “You don’t know,” he said.
I had an appetite. I went to the kitchen cupboard and looked, and then I opened the fridge.
The two of them go on to have a night time feast, which is clearly a substitute for sex. Vern was obviously interested in the idea, but has contented himself with “apple pie topped with melted cheese” (14). The story ends with the narrator, firm in her judgemental state, plagued by real and imaginary ants. The ants are symbolically placed here to signify her wish to destroy “That trash”, meaning her neighbour across the street. The problem for the narrator is that she cannot see the symbolic significance like the reader. Due to her ignorance of the bizarre sexual preferences she needs “Vern to explain [to her]”, she is unable to see her own hypocrisy, and blind moral judgements, just as she is blind to the fact that “[turning] on every light in the house until [it was] blazing” is in actual fact an overwhelming urge to be watched herself. What is perhaps the most significant point to this story is Carver’s awareness of the implications of hyperrealism. He identifies that we are viewing the narrator, who is viewing her neighbour, who is viewing his wife. Because of this, the story leaves the astute reader rather wary of passing their omniscient judgement.
When we come to identify where this fiction stems from, why it is has become popular? and what judgements can we offer? in a wider context there are two other attributes to consider. One is the amount of University writing programmes that evolved around Carver’s heyday, and the other is the change in the legitimation of fiction in general. John Aldridge assigns blame to both of these. In ‘The New American Assembly-Line Fiction: An Empty Blue Collar’, he details how criticism has shifted since the nineteen sixties:
…the business affiliations writers have with publishers and agents have assumed much greater importance than they were seen to have twenty-four years before [1963], while other formerly important adjuncts of the creative process - literary magazines and critics - have become quite irrelevant…
[the new critics are from another breed altogether, as Aldridge points out]
…the only critics named…are daily or weekly reviewers for such large-circulation publications as the New York Times, Publisher’s Weekly, Time, Newsweek, and the Washington Post…In 1963, such reviewers were contemptuously banished to a Siberian exile colony designated on the map as “Squaresville”…These are the people whose function it is to report regularly on newly published books, but who, because of limitations of time and space, are nearly always forced to treat them superficially and, for the most part, favourably that is, with emphasis on those qualities that will be attractive to an avid group of book buyers.
So with literary criticism in the hands of writers, literary agents and publishers, there is very little wonder why Carver’s brand of fiction legitimates itself, and those followers, or “crank-turners” as David Foster Wallace tells us, are allowed to produce literature of an arguably sub standard. Aldridge says:
Such a situation makes it possible for literary products to be touted and sold on the market without having to pass more than minimal critical inspection…Where in 1950, for example, there may have been ten or fifteen new young writers of some evident promise competing for critical and public attention, there now appear to be hundreds, mass-produced as if by machine…so many of them seem to be interchangeable in their manner of writing, as if the machine that produced them specialized in turning out carbon copies.
There seemed to be little else to do, when we are beset by a surge in writers there must inevitably be a surge in critics, even if it necessitates handing the job over to the writers. These “interchangeable” writers lead to hyperreal production gone mad, and this is explicitly linked to the rise in University writing programmes. Aldridge goes on to talk about the older American writer being “highly individualistic” because of their relationship with the culture they inhabit, their estrangement being the primary quality of their writing. But what remains now, Aldridge argues, are writers who are no longer estranged from their culture. The University writing programmes that Carver and many of his contemporary hyperrealists undertook and taught on, have evolved into something else altogether. These writing programmes are not dependent on knowledge, and what has occurred is that successful writers like Carver have endorsed a system where they can teach their craft in Universities, arguably with the result of churning out a bunch of clones, although we obviously only hear about those who are successful:
…the younger generation of university-trained American writers [resemble] the British more closely than they do their literary predecessors in this country, for they too seem not to be estranged from their culture, if only for the reason they belong to a culture of their own, a professional aristocracy or guild made up of young writers like themselves and their instructors. This culture has very little, if any, connection with American society in general.
 Raymond Carver did, along with a few others, regardless of his affiliations with University writing programmes, instigate a distinct literary change, a “new statement” as Lyotard would have it (Lyotard, J. F. The Postmodern Condition. 2004). So it would appear that he is the exception to the rule because he came along at the beginning, and indeed Aldridge appears to agree, although he does not celebrate the consequences, complaining that:
the academic writer is allowed to remain aloof from that struggle [literary marketplace] for as long as he continues to function within the benevolent precincts of the fraternity…In fact his academic training as a writer will undoubtedly have taught him early on that the taking of risks is decidedly not the gateway to literary success…A piece of writing that is marked by originality of style or point of view or that does not conform to what is considered fashionable as measured by its resemblance to the work of certain admired mentors, such as Raymond Carver and Anne Beattie, will undoubtedly be disturbing to many members of the class, and so will not be deemed acceptable.
 The hyperreal, as Baudrillard explains it to us, and as our evidence shows, is a concerning factor and it is explicitly linked with the Postmodern theories of Lyotard. Raymond Carver has left in his wake an entourage of succinctness seekers, arguably following the wrong pattern, those writers David Foster Wallace refers to as “crank-turners” who believe that Carver was creating a “rigid aesthetic program” for them to follow:
 I think the crank-turner's replaced the critic as the real angel of death as far as literary movements are concerned, now. You get some bona fide artists who come along and really divide by zero and weather some serious shit-storms of shock and ridicule in order to promulgate some really important ideas. Once they triumph, though, and their ideas become legitimate and accepted, the crank-turners and wannabes come running to the machine, and out pour the gray pellets, and now the whole thing’s become a hollow form, just another institution of fashion. Take a look at some of the critical-theory Ph.D. dissertations being written now. They're like de Man and Foucault in the mouth of a dull child.
(McCaffery, Larry. “An Interview with David Foster Wallace”, 1993).
 The disruption of language games, as Lyotard tells us, is indeed important and essential in order to make any new statement. But there is a point at which the next set of language games needs to come along and disrupt what has become, not only fashionable excess, but a process that has directly become involved with the service of a capitalist machine. The university programmes justify themselves by producing a new writer every so often, but they are very rarely innovative, and what about all the others who are unsuccessful; left to teach, read and write for the guild of other paying members? And is there anything new left to say?
Conclusion
One thing must be considered. Even if reading a story by Raymond Carver allows us to easily place the writer alongside his work, and not many writers achieve this, we also have to admit that this kind of fiction can be as easy to forget as an episode of our favourite T.V show. Does this signify the importance of such literature, even if its only purpose is to deflate the claims that high art still propose to have above low art? Its importance goes a little further than this. It has to be said that the average reader who is brought up on a staple diet of television and literary fiction, is perfectly well equipped in the twenty first century to use Carver’s fiction in order to amuse themselves with, and educate themselves against false representations of reality. Mason’s narratives are so full of characters affected by popular culture, false, idealistic visions of reality, that we as readers mock them. If anything this brand of fiction, in the creation of hyperreal stories, mocks both the strategies of realism and metafiction. It is correct, as one of Mason’s characters tells us, that “The twentieth century’s taking all the mysteries out of life”, and nothing much has changed in the twenty first (Shiloh and Other Stories.). We are however, “no longer in the society of the spectacle”, as Jean Baudrillard tells us, and since our culture is a fully assimilated hyperreal one, in a nihilistic sense there seems little point in lamenting the issue. On a more lamentable note, in many respects the new set of language games is still on its way, yet when it arrives it can only change the rules in minor ways, and it will not be too long until these rules are fully assimilated into literary fashion and put to good use by the hyperreal “crank-turners” in the service of capital. There appears to be very little left other than perhaps another revival of metafiction that will perhaps breed an intertextual relationship with, or parody Carver’s innovations.
Judging Carver only, there is a sense of optimism in his work, and it does not derive from the familiar modernist belief that art offers the possibility of escape from the disorders of the modern world, or that it can change conditions. Carver mocks these beliefs along with most others. Instead, Carver posits a less elevated function for art with his suggestion that it is valuable simply because it gives us a chance to create a space where the effects of ordinary living can be momentarily defied; no solutions are offered. There may well be much to be learnt from setting the mirror of art up to its own linguistic or representational structures, but I posit that it is more bountiful to set it up to an accurate model of human nature in order to illuminate the transparencies in the reflection; even if it can only “approximate the outlines of our own lives” (Carver, Raymond. American Short Story Masterpieces. 1987)
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His name is Alex Field and he has a malignant brain tumour.  It’s a particularly nasty one and it needs very specific treatment that isn’t widely available in the UK for various reasons, and he desperately needs to go to the USA.  You can find out more details about Alex and his condition on the website dedicated to fundraising for his trip to the states.

He looks like any other boy you might meet in the street, and by all accounts and what I read on the website I get the impression that he’s a cheeky little devil too.  This is so much like my own son it’s almost unbearable to watch a child like Alex have to face his brain tumour and keep a brave face on for those around him.  Children are tremendously resilient and boys like Alex are an inspiration to us all.

Although it’s unbearable to watch and learn about things such as this, it is surely our duty as human beings to offer some support, even if we can’t offer much money.  There are many ways we can help Alex raise money for his treatment: you could organise an event, a raffle, or do something as simple as tell someone else about it.  Awareness is key for Alex, but we must act fast.  We need to raise £300,000 as soon as possible.

Use the contact details from his website if you have any ideas and you want to offer your support.  You can also donate directly through the site using PayPal too.  Please also remember to drop me an email to let me know what you’re doing and I can perhaps tell others in order to help inspire more people to do that little bit more; £300,000 is a lot of money, but if we take this nationwide we can get it!

 

Posted on Monday Nov 1 4:28:00 UTC 2010

Carver’s Renaissance.

 

“The youth of the sixties grown up” is what we should remind ourselves, and Bill Buford’s comment in Granta could not be more appropriate.  Carver’s generation of writer is acutely aware that it cannot comprehend the contemporary American experience, and that it is difficult, if not impossible to represent in terms other than those of an experimental nature.  Yet, as we have noted, Carver dislikes metafiction and its habit of highlighting such problems as the inadequacy of language for example.  Therefore, with Patricia Waugh’s un-refuted quote in mind (“it is impossible to describe an objective world…”), his tactic is to force his neo-realist narratives to deliberately fall short in such a way that they illuminate exactly what they will inevitably fail to encompass.  What they fail to encompass is what the metafictionalists go to enormous pains to fail at or accomplish: the condition of Postmodern American life and its unrepresentability, and this is exactly what Carver et al put up for show.  At first glance we believe Carver does not share Postmodernism’s characteristic rejection of a single world view as such, he appears in pursuit of a single view, albeit not a world one, his view is the debris of Postmodernism itself no matter how minute, or banal the detail.  Many critics have attacked this style, and the list is long, but one in particular, Dan Pope, summarises them all quite well:

 

   …fickle, alienated, generic, self-obsessed, family-less, often alcoholic, often divorced characters; the writers’ fondness for the present tense and their concurrent disregard for background or historical explication; the monotonous use of colloquialisms, the prime-time sitcom speeches; the unresolved situations and the characters’ vague sense of emptiness and disillusionment; the trendinesss evidenced by endless references to brand names; … the willingness of these authors to mirror social and cultural structures without probing towards a sense of the human spirit.

 

We could take each and every one of these definitions and identify that, not only could they apply to many more writers (some of them more mainstream), but this is precisely what Carver was intending to do.  To take a little of the statement: “fickle, alienated, generic, self-obsessed, family-less, often alcoholic…” we can pile all of these into the same bag and label it Postmodern America, or at least Carver’s vision of the American working class he constantly writes about.  The stories are not pessimistic, on the contrary, Carver shows us how people cope in these conditions, the survivors; he says during interview:

 

…trying and succeeding are two different matters.  In some lives, people always succeed; and I think it’s grand when that happens.  In other lives, people don’t succeed at what they try to do, at the things they want most to do, the large or small things that support the life.  These lives are, of course, valid to write about, the lives of the people who don’t succeed.  Most of my own experience…has to do with the latter situation…They’d like to set things right, but they can’t.  And usually they do know it, I think, and after that they just do the best they can.

 

The “vague sense of emptiness and disillusionment” experienced by the characters, and readers alike, is a sure way of presenting the condition of Postmodern working class America for them in its own terms, merely in presentation itself; the whole list speaks for itself in many ways.  It also shows how Carver forces his narratives to fall short, primarily by being willing and daring enough in the late twentieth century to mirror social structures.   More importantly if we are to consider Jean-Franηois Lyotard’s refutation of the grand narrative, and his subsequent call for smaller ones that resist single explanations, then we realise that Carver does share the war on totality, and that he does engage very well within the discourse of Postmodernism.

 

In The Postmodern Condition: A Report on Knowledge, many of Lyotard’s ideas lead to a bountiful examination of Carver’s connection with Postmodernism.  In his simplified definition of Postmodern as “incredulity toward metanarratives” Lyotard continues to detail Postmodernism’s distrust of, refutation of, and subsequent deconstruction of the grand narratives of  modernity that depict human progress, like the Enlightenment.  Generically, by this Lyotard means the stories that society tells itself in order to legitimate its actions and supposedly better its individuals.  Lyotard declares that:

 

Narration is the quintessential form of customary knowledge, in more ways than one…the narratives allow the society in which they are told, on the one hand, to define its criteria of competence and, on the other, to evaluate according to those criteria what is performed or can be performed within it.

 

In a sense, the people are only that which actualises the narratives: once again, they do this not only by recounting them, but also by listening to them and recounting themselves through them; in other words, by putting them into “play” in their institutions… [narratives], thus define what has the right to be said and done in the culture in question, and since they are themselves a part of that culture, they are legitimated by the simple fact that they do what they do

 

In a literary context we can observe that the increasing awareness of a Postmodern world in the latter half of the twentieth century has resulted in a revolt against the ‘grand narrative’.  What Lyotard observes and posits as an alternative are more modest, localised narratives.  He recognises that by simple multiplicity of different discourses, to the extent of paralogy, there is inevitably a greater, diverse range of language games that have nothing to do with the efficiency of the Modernist machine.  By paralogy it is important to remind ourselves that this means a false logic, and with reference to Carver, it is his fiction that only appears false simply because it is not like that of his predecessors and contemporaries:

 

That is why it is important to increase displacement in the games, and even to disorient it, in such a way as to make an unexpected “move” (a new statement).

 

The Postmodern mini-narrative offered by Lyotard as an alternative is what we are given by the Postmodern writer in all their guises, particularly those experimental of them.  But Carver differs by making what Lyotard calls “a new statement” simply by disorienting the language games in play, i.e. those of the metafictionalists already discussed, by opposing them and changing the rules to incorporate his own style. Carver’s preference for realism, without the formal qualities of traditional realism in the likes of Twain, is an innovation, and its paralogical debut is more than likely why it attracted the kind of negative criticism of those such as Dan Pope.  Carver has therefore rejected the narrative of experimental representation, and he is also very much what Buford identified as “suspicious of heroes, crusades and easy idealism”.
   
 
The pioneering American has long since disappeared in Carver’s fiction, his world is very much like that described by Christopher Lasch in The Culture of Narcissism:

 

Today Americans are overcome not by the sense of endless possibility but by the banality of the social order they have erected against it.  Having internalised the social restraints by means of which they formerly sought to keep possibility within civilized limits, they feel themselves overwhelmed by an annihilating boredom, like animals whose instincts have withered in captivity.

 

Carver is content to flex his realist muscles within this Postmodern, Post-structuralist climate, a Post-structuralism that in Jacques Derrida’s own words:

 

must always aim at a certain relationship, unperceived by the writer, between what he commands and what he does not command of the patterns of language that he uses…[it] attempts to make the not-seen accessible to sight.

 

Carver is not troubled by these theories, and he responds not by becoming an author who presents metafiction exploring and critiquing the inadequacies of given realities and language, but by expressing this inadequacy in nothing more than the inarticulation of his characters, who live as Lasch describes, “like animals whose instincts have withered in captivity”.
 
 It is this attention to the ordinary that requires most of our examination if we are to substantiate my claim that Carver’s stories are almost certainly hyperreal.  Another writer, Frederick Barthelme, talks about Carver’s brand very well in his article: ‘On Being Wrong: Convicted Minimalist Spills Bean’, for The New York Times Book Review in 1988:

 

A couple of people had already turned the post-modern on its head.  Raymond Carver, who must’ve thought, “Well, if you can do anything, maybe you can do nothing,” did.  Perfectly clear and simple, a brilliant idea: self-imposed poverty of means, the inverted image of the usual proliferations.

…if you were a trained post-modern, sold on the primacy of the word, on image, on surface, sound, connotative and denotative play, style and grace, but short on sensitivity to the representational, what you did was drive from Texas to Mississippi and realize, while crossing the 20-mile bridge over the swamp outside Baton Rouge, that people were more interesting than words…it was joined by the sense that ordinary experience - almost any ordinary experience - was essentially more complex and interesting than a well contrived encounter with big-L language…

 

So suddenly you had characters that looked as if you just slowed for them in the parking lot outside the K & B drugstore, but instead of waiting patiently and driving off, as you would in life, now you were talking to them, and they were talking back Ύnot in conventional “realist” fashion or as people might in life, but like some characters in trees, or somebody discovering ice, or some other artificial beings in some other artificial text Ύvery careful, very clear, achingly pristine and precise.  But because you put them right down on an ordinary planet that looked strikingly like ours, the readers were reading right along as if what you’d written was some kind of one-for-one depiction of a real world.  And, you know, you couldn’t say for sure that it wasn’t; maybe it was a well-edited, delicately vetted, meticulously rendered, pernickety version thereof…

 

This “well-edited, delicately vetted” notion is forever prevalent in Carver’s stories.  But either way, the glimpses and revelations we get from the characters somewhat ordinary lives leave us in little doubt as to why the reader can go “right along” with it; they are verging on too real; hyperreal?  Carver’s fiction is a paradox, it is sketchily precise.  Barthelme goes on to analogise about the fiction, showing how less is literally more and can speaks volumes.  Rather comically he says that, rather than any elaborate technique, the Carver brand of fiction (and his own) is:

 

…closer to the moment when Indiana Jones pulls the gun and blows the swordsman away - why fuzz with the rules, why not just get it done?

 

Precision is an attribute Carver insists upon, and referring to V. S. Pritchett’s definition of a short story as “something glimpsed from the corner of the eye, in passing”, he details in his essay: ‘On Writing’, printed in Fires what the writer can do with this glimpse:

 

The short story writer’s task is to invest in the glimpse with all that is in his power.  He’ll bring his intelligence and literary skill to bear…of how things out there really are and how he sees those things Ύlike no one else sees them…And this is done through the use of clear and specific language…The words can be so precise they may even sound flat, but they can still carry; if used right, they can hit all the notes.

 

 ‘What’s in Alaska?’, originally published in Will You Please Be Quiet, Please? (1976), is an excellent example of this.  The story also identifies some of the most significant applications of Carver’s hyperrealist prose.  In characteristically Carveresque fashion there is no real plot, but if we had to force one in a linear fashion, we have Jack who buys some new shoes after work, takes a bath, he and his wife buy some snacks for a get together with another couple, they go to their friends and gets stoned, then go home and go to bed:

 

   “Did I see some U-No bars in that sack?” Helen said.

   “I bought some,” Jack said.  “I spotted them the last minute.”

   “U-No bars are good,”  Carl said.

   “They’re creamy,”  Mary said.  “They melt in your mouth.”

   “We have some M&Ms and Popsicles if anyone wants any,”  Carl said.

   Mary said, “I’ll have a Popsicle.  Are you going to the kitchen?”

   “Yeah, and I’m going to get the cream soda, too,”  Carl said.  “I just remembered.  You guys want a glass?”

 

 
Apart from appearing as though Carver was under sponsorship writing this story, it does not seem to signify anything at all.  This is a representative extract of the entire story; the narrative fails to deliver anything different other than the ordinary, impassive type of conversation we see here.  There are endless stoned conversations and misleading statements made whilst under the influence of pot.  It is important at the moment to consider Carver’s precision as synonymous with hyperreal, and as with all of Carver’s fiction, what is implied behind these hyperreal, inarticulate ramblings is what is of the utmost importance.  Looking at a definition offered by Larry McCaffery and Sinda Gregory in ‘Alive and Writing: Interviews with American Authors of the 1980s’, originally published in the Mississippi Review, we can get a capsule definition of this form of hyperreality:

 

To be inside a Raymond Carver story is a bit like standing in a model kitchen at Sears Ύyou experience a weird feeling of disjuncture that comes from being in a place where things appear to be real and familiar, but where a closer look shows that the turkey is a papier-mβché, the broccoli is rubber, and the frilly curtains cover a blank wall.  In Carver’s fiction things are simply not as they appear.  Or, rather, things are more than they appear to be, for often commonplace objects Ύ a broken refrigerator, a car, a cigarette, a bottle of bear or whiskey Ύbecome transformed in Carver’s hands, from realistic props in realistic stories to powerful, emotionally charged signifiers in and of themselves.

 

Carver’s attention to the banal is a narrative technique that paradoxically shadows, thus illuminating the real motive in the writing.  Being the “youth of the sixties grown up”, the Carver school of writing are representative of their age in a similar way to those in Fiesta: The Sun Also Rises, struggling their way through Hemingway’s essentially plotless narrative.  The banal and plotless narrative in ‘What’s In Alaska?’ leaves us looking for something else, just like in Hemingway, and it is here that we see Carver’s favourite themes bubbling to the surface.  Jack and Mary are clearly not happy with one another or themselves.  In true Carveresque fashion we see the lives of these two couples for what they really are, primarily because of the banality of the narrative.  Jack and Mary clearly want to change their enclosed life, they need something new.  At first they are both enthusiastic about Mary’s job opportunity in Alaska, Jack asserts that he has “always wanted to go…”.
 
The beginning of the story really sets up the potential liberation of this couple, Jack has even bought some shoes on his way home from work, that make “his feet feel free and springy”.  Of course in true Carveresque style, these things are a mere foreshadowing of what will inevitably fall to pieces.  The story’s hyperreal attention to the two couples’ stoned ramblings accommodates Carver’s use of symbolic code perfectly.  Infidelity is a major theme in his stories, and ‘What’s in Alaska?’ details, between the stoned conversations, the affair, or potential affair between Mary and Carl, and Carver remains characteristically vague and non-judgmental.  Once all the characters are well and truly stoned there are constant indications and Freudian slips in their conversation, and overt actions that signify this:

 

  “Jack’s on a little bummer tonight,” Mary said.

  “Why do you say that?” Jack asked.  He looked at her.  “That’s a good way to put me on one.”

  “I was just teasing,” Mary said.  She came over and sat beside him on the sofa.  “I was just teasing, honey.”

 

[and later on]

 

  “What did you mean when you said I was on a bummer?” Jack said to Mary.

  “What?” Mary said.

  Jack stared at her and blinked.  “You said something about me being on a bummer.  What made you say that?”

  “I don’t remember now, but I can tell when you are,” she said.  “But please don’t bring up anything negative, okay?”

  “Okay,” Jack said.  “All I’m saying is I don’t know why you said that.  If I wasn’t on a bummer before you said it, it’s enough when you say it to put me on one.”

  “If the shoe fits,” Mary said.  She leaned on the arm of the sofa and laughed until tears came.

 

It is quite clear that Mary is almost disassociating with Jack, alienating him in the presence of their friends, and also her laughter at the pun “If the shoe fits,” is more than likely referring to Jack’s new shoes that she didn’t “like the color” of.  Carver continues to create this divide before making the relationship between Mary and Carl a little less subtle:

 

Jack watched them walk into the kitchen.  He settled back against the cushion and watched them walk.  Then he leaned forward very slowly.  He squinted.  He saw Carl reach up to a shelf in the cupboard.  He saw Mary move against Carl from behind and put her arms around his waist.

  “Are you guys serious?” Helen said.

  “Very serious,” Jack said.

  “About Alaska,” Helen said.

  He stared at her,

  “I thought you said something,” Helen said.

  Carl and Mary came back.  Carl carried a large bag of M&Ms and a bottle of cream soda.  Mary sucked on an orange Popsicle.

 

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Posted on Wednesday Oct 6 1:00:00 UTC 2010

Will You Please Be Ordinary, Please?

 

Metafiction vs. Realism.

 

The American short story has been built upon a foundation of realist fiction and Raymond Carver’s brand can be seen as a continuation of this, and a reaction against his predecessors.  American Literature is rich in realist fiction, and disregarding the Modernist revolt against its characteristics in the early part of the twentieth century, let us examine an American wave of revolutionists who were as equally dissatisfied with Modernism’s solutions, as they were Realism’s claim to representation. 
  
I refer to the writers according to the laws of the Postmodern American writer databases: John Barth, Donald Barthelme, Thomas Pynchon, William Gass, and Robert Coover to name a few.  Most importantly, all of these writers have successfully practiced the art of the short form, otherwise the list would include many others such as DeLillo for example, all of whom would have interesting and exciting qualities to think about.  I choose the short story because it was the only published form practiced by Raymond Carver other than poetry and essays, and his characteristically unadorned style is what is under scrutiny; many other formal qualities would become involved if we were to examine the novel, just as many of the qualities of Carver’s hyperreal stories would have to be omitted to make equitable criticism.

 

Firstly, no-where in Raymond Carver will you find a story that is narrated by a sperm cell.  I refer to ‘Night Sea-Journey’, John Barth’s second story in Lost in the Funhouse.  Shocking if you are not familiar with the story, but this is just one type of difference that needs to be distinguished in order to define Carver by what he is not.  Therefore at least one definition that could encompass this example has to be non-experimental.  Carver makes his thoughts about experimental fiction plainly known in an interview for The Bloomsbury Review (1986):

 

As for the experimental fiction of the sixties and the seventies, much of that work I have a hard time with.  I think the literary experiment failed.  In trying out different ways of expressing themselves, the experimental writers failed to communicate in the most fundamental and essential way.  They got farther and farther away from their audience…when people look back on that period fifty years from now it’s going to be looked on as an odd time in the literary history of the country, an interruption, somehow.

 

However, John Barth is experimental, like many of his contemporaries, and the following extract from the title story out of Lost in the Funhouse shows Barth being characteristically metafictional, to the point of self parody, and any hopes for realism are absolutely dashed:

 

En route to Ocean City he sat in the back seat of the family car with his brother Peter, age fifteen, and Magda G____, age fourteen, a pretty girl and exquisite young lady who lived not far from them on B____ Street [...] Initials, blanks, or both were often substituted for proper names in nineteenth century fiction to enhance the illusion of reality.  It is as if the author felt it necessary to delete the names for reasons of tact or legal liability.  Interestingly, as with other aspects of realism, it is an illusion that is being enhanced, by purely artificial means.  
  

Barth is far from alone in his efforts as far as this is concerned, his contemporary Donald Barthelme also had a very limited interest in ‘realist’ fiction, and another reason I choose him will become clearer later.  His fiction depends, like many Postmodern writers, on how widely read he and his readers are and how he utilises this attribute, like his satirical novel Snow White for example, a re-contextualisation of the popular fairy-tale into a 1960s commune consisting of seven men and one woman.  The following is an extract from ‘The Policemen’s Ball’ (1970) and it connects his style with that above by Barth:

 

This is a town without pity, this town.  For those whose voices lack the crack of authority.  Luckily the uniform…Why won’t she surrender her person?  Does she think she can resist the force?  The force of the force?

   “These birds are delicious.”

   Driving Horace and Margot smoothly to the Armory, the new cabdriver thought about basketball.

   Why do they always applaud the man who makes the shot?

   Why don’t they applaud the ball?

(Not my omission)

 

Although relatively easy to understand, this extract does not follow the conventional rules, such as well made plots and clearly defined characters.  Rationality is ignored and toyed with, sentences are truncated, as we see in Barth’s work, and throughout this story, and many others, we are left to question the relevance of many events and characters, like the cabdriver for example. 
  
 Both, Barth and Barthelme never abide by the traditional rules of realist fiction, and many of their narratives are full of gaps and indeterminacies that require the reader to (if at all possible) complete the story or at least determine meaning at any particular time.
  
One of metafiction’s main complaints, detailed in its various forms in Patricia Waugh’s study Metafiction: The Theory and Practice of Self-Conscious Fiction, is that “it is impossible to describe an objective world because the observer always changes the observed”; a statement which we shall also consider when we look at Carver.  In From Puritanism to Postmodernism, Richard Ruland and Malcolm Bradbury describe the second half of the twentieth century very well, and identify literatures need, and inability to represent:

 

What followed the war was an age of materialism, military expansion, ideological anxiety and a sense of the rapid transformation of consciousness…As writers increasingly began to observe, it was an era in which reality came increasingly to resemble unreality, when actuality frequently outpaced the writer’s ability to image it and fiction needed to be superfiction to cope with an ever more fictional age of history.

 

 

[and later, referring to Ken Kesey’s novel One Flew over the Cuckoo’s Nest, and Pynchon’s V (1963), The Crying of Lot 49 (1966), Gravity’s Rainbow (1973), they say:]

 

In many such books, history is no longer a graspable progression but a stage set of lunacy and pain that turns the writer away from the immediacy of realism toward a mocking of the world’s substance, a cartooning of character, a fantasizing of the “facts”.

 

 

Inevitably this growing ideology led to a crisis in American literature, and was identified by many writers of both novels and short stories; in 1967 John Barth wrote his essay ‘The Literature of Exhaustion’ in an attempt to address these issues:

 

Suppose you’re a writer by vocation Ύ a “print-orientated bastard,” as the McLuhanites call us Ύ and you feel, for example, that the novel, if not narrative literature generally, if not the printed word altogether, has by this hour of the world just about shot its bolt, as Leslie Fiedler and others

maintain.  (I’m inclined to agree, with reservations and hedges.  Literary forms certainly have histories and historical contingencies, and it may well be that the novel’s time as a major art form is up, as the “times” of classical tragedy, Italian and German grand opera, or the sonnet-sequence came to be…

 

Barth’s essay is not as much of a crisis as it seems, more a recognition that the literary forms are all used up, what literature has already produced is enough to provoke further work; we see this in the re-working of fables and fairy tales like Barthelme’s mentioned earlier.  There appears to be a little pessimism here, but what Barth is saying that there is nothing new to write, but we can celebrate the fact that are enabled to be versatile with what literature is already there.  In his later essay ‘The Literature of Replenishment’ (also included in The Friday Book), he verifies this (no doubt prompted by the fact that he went on to publish several works), his ideas being closely correlated with those of Roland Barthes’ study ‘The Death of the Author’:

 

…literature can never be exhausted, if only because no single literary text can be exhausted Ύits “meaning” residing as it does in its transactions with individual readers over time, space, and language.  I like to remind misreaders of my earlier essay that written literature is in fact about 4,500 years old…it is also doubtless very large, perhaps virtually infinite.

 

 

This ‘crisis’ seemed to have been on every writers lips, manifesting itself in many different ways.  It appears that nearly all aspects of literature were called into the Postmodern interrogation.  Philip Roth (significantly included in Carver’s choice of American Short Story Masterpieces) identified this, and he comments on the problematic nature, not of representation, but more so subject matter, in contemporary American literature:

 

The actuality, [Roth wrote] is continually outdoing our talents, and the culture tosses up figures almost daily that are the envy of any novelist.

 

 

Subject is something that Raymond Carver has an abundance of.  The crisis of representation per se, and any contemporary philosophical dilemmas that have been overcome by his contemporaries and predecessors, appear at a glance to have been transcended completely by Carver.  In contrast to those other writers mentioned so far we need only look at any one of Carver’s stories to realise what we have is definitely neo-realism, or perhaps more of a retreat into a realist tradition; a whole story is out of the question, so we must content ourselves with the difficult (if not impossible) task of finding a quintessential small exert that will clearly demonstrate Carver’s taste for realism.  All of the following can be found in Carver’s collection Where I’m Calling From (1988):

 

This friend of mine from work, Bud, he asked Fran and me to supper.  I didn’t know his wife and he didn’t know Fran.  That made us even.  But Bud and I were friends.  And I knew there was a baby at Bud’s house.

(‘Feathers’)

 

Earl Ober was between jobs as a salesman.  But Doreen, his wife, had gone to work nights as a waitress at a twenty-four-hour coffee shop at the edge of town.  One night, when he was drinking, Earl decided to stop by the coffee shop and have something to eat.

(‘They’re Not Your Husband’)

 

Fact is the car needs to be sold in a hurry, and Leo sends Toni out do it.  Toni is smart and has personality.  She used to sell children’s encyclopaedias door to door.  She signed him up, even though he didn’t have kids.  Afterward, Leo asked her for a date, and the date led to this.

(‘Are These Actual Miles?’)

 

There are only three openings here from Carver’s work, but the point I wish to make is that every one of them is representative of his fiction.  The stories do not become much more elaborate (if at all) than these openings.  It is unadorned, precise, and gives only the necessary information in a colloquial manner, arguably readable, and understandable by anyone.  So these examples are defined as a retreat into realism, primarily because of their opposition to the Postmodern literature that was allegedly dealing with the crisis of representation, yet alienating many readers.

 

In a similar way to the pop artists of the sixties, who turned their backs on the expressionists of the forties and fifties by presenting the depersonalised processes of mass production and breaking the divide between high and low art, Carver, with the situational positions of his working class characters (themselves creations of, and consumers of, mass production), in contrast to the brief popularity enjoyed by his contemporary metafictionalists in their heyday, was unlikely to create anything other than extreme verisimilitude.
  
Carver’s writing is almost certainly reactionary, his sentiments about experimental fiction and the categorising of writers within various groups (including Postmodernism) is no secret as we have already identified.  This reaction is verified in his introduction to American Short Story Masterpieces (1987) where he explains his editorial choice:

 

…we were not out to be democratic in our selections, or even representative…Decisions had to be made that were not always easy.  But aside from this, however, we were simply not interested in putting before the reader further samples of what some have called “postmodern” or “innovative” fiction, and others have hailed as “the new fiction”Ύself- reflexive, fabulist, magical realist, as well as all mutations, offshoots, and fringe movements thereof.

 

He would never be short of finding realist short story writers within his nation’s literary history, yet his editorial choice, despite the ability to serve as a companion to an earlier volume that includes stories from earlier generations, makes a definite selection from the post war years, many from his own generation during the 70s and 80s.  Arguably, this makes a statement about the continuation of the realist short story in spite of those practitioners like Barth, who were writing during the same decades.
  
Carver considered his short stories about the working class American to be ‘realistic,’ although, characteristically dubious about labels, never really choosing to title himself as one: “I don’t go around think of myself as a realist writer.  But, it’s true, I am trying to write about recognizable human beings who find themselves in more or less critical situations”, he says during interview with The Bloomsbury Review in 1986.  And referring to his editorial choice in the introduction to American Short Story Masterpieces, he chooses his words carefully: “that is to say, toward realistically fashioned stories that may even in some cases approximate the outlines of our own lives”, he says.  The obvious difference, as far as realism is concerned, is that Carver’s brand is not dependent upon setting and location as it would have been in a traditional sense; if we had to identify a setting and location we could only say that it is the same for every one of his stories bar one: Working class Postmodern America. 
  
Although Carver writes exclusively about people who live within Postmodern America, we would be correct in saying that he is associated with, rather than separated from earlier and contemporary metafictional practitioners of the short story who write within, and engage with, Postmodern America in the experimental form.  Both groups are writing in their own respective age, but combined, these ages signify extreme change.  The turbulent sixties as it is so often called led to what we might call its aftermath in the seventies and eighties, a definite readjustment period, post-Vietnam and Watergate, as the old ideals and norms gave way to new philosophies and theories.

 

But surely, since Carver does not follow the metafictional tradition of representation (or unrepresentability) the question must arise: should we call him a Postmodern writer, just because he writes within that particular period?  That period, seemingly without end, that sometimes appears in a literary context to have been created like a database in order to pigeonhole writers and artists for the sole purpose of easy access.
  
The answer is yes and like his predecessors and contemporaries, Raymond Carver has done away with many of the earlier narrative and philosophical conventions (well-made plot, chronological sequence, the authoritative omniscient author, the rational connection between what characters 'do' and what they 'are', the causal connection between 'surface' details and the 'deep', 'scientific laws' of existence), but he is almost certainly neo-realist?  What Carver and others such as Bobbie Ann Mason, Richard Ford and Tobias Wolff have accomplished is a resurrection of certain realistic modes of writing within a cultural climate that has altered considerably the status of experience.
  
What was necessary in Carver’s view was to represent contemporary, Postmodern America in realistic terms.  This is seen in many stories, with emphasis on realism to the extreme in small situations easily identifiable by those among his readers as something they too have perhaps experienced.  In an interview in 1984 for Haagse Post (Amsterdam) Carver explains himself:

 

“Some reviewers have criticized me because my characters are so powerless and seem to reconcile themselves to the bad luck or misfortune that crosses their path.  And in one story in particular, it’s called ‘Preservation’, has received a lot of criticism because it’s about people who’d rather complain about their broken refrigerator than call a mechanic to fix it.  ‘Why don’t they just get that thing fixed?’ asked one reviewer.  ‘Then they won’t have to put up with it anymore.’

  “But of course that’s not how things work out for people who have barely enough money for busfare, or to fill up their gas tanks.  As far as money is concerned, they don’t have a penny to spare…That’s the kind of life I describe.  But before the press drew my attention to it, I didn’t think my characters were that bad off.  Know what I mean?  This country is bursting at the seams with waitresses and taxi drivers and gas station attendants and hotel clerks.  But are those people unhappier than those who’ve ‘made it’?  No…

 

The actuality of presenting this type of fiction could have turned against him in many ways, primarily because those stories he wrote are not only realist (to the point of hyperreal), they are also a rejection of all the things listed earlier as the realist formal qualities that have been refuted and rejected by the Postmodern writer, no matter what their style.


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